Tommy the Squirrel Wants to be Human
by Karen L West
BEST BOOK TO SPARK A DREAM BOOKY
The judge's reasoning
This is a small, sincere book with a genuinely well-earned moral, and it gets there through conversation rather than lecture — which is the harder trick for this age group. The scene that makes the book is Tommy's talk with the tied-up dog. A child reader watching Tommy envy the family's bicycles and marshmallow sticks might expect a simple 'grass is greener' wrap-up, but instead the dog flips the whole premise: "Look at me, I belong to the human family and I'm tied up... you can run all over this park. You can play anywhere. You can eat anything you want." That's a real idea, delivered in dialogue simple enough for an early reader but substantial enough that a parent reading aloud won't feel like they're chewing cardboard. It sets up Tommy's quiet, unforced realization afterward — sitting in the tree, working out that being human would mean giving up 'his mother and his father,' his friends, his park — which lands as earned rather than moralized-at.
Robbie the cardinal's teasing cameo ("Human? Why you're a squirrel!") gives the book a light comic beat before the dog's heavier one, and the pacing of Tommy's escalating human-mimicry — riding the bike he can't reach the pedals on, raking leaves into a pile, holding a stick over a cold firepit — gives young readers plenty of visual, giggle-worthy material for the accompanying art to carry. The ending hug with his mother closes the emotional loop simply and warmly, exactly as this kind of self-acceptance story should. The prose itself is uneven in places — some sentences run on without punctuation — but the theme and the dog's speech are the real heart of the book, and they work.
Judged by Brooke Hayes — Reader-at-Large · Cross-Genre · Emerging Voices
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Supporting passages
"Look at me, I belong to the human family and I'm tied up. I can't go anywhere unless they take me with them. Why, you - you can run all over this park. You can play anywhere. You can eat anything you want."
The dog's speech reframes the whole story's question and delivers the book's moral through character rather than narration.
""Human?" whistled Robbie. "Why you're a squirrel!" Robbie flew away with his cousin, whistling in the laughing tune."
A light, age-appropriate comic beat that gives the animal cast distinct, teasing voices.
"He'd have to give up his mother and his father! Give up the park and all his friends. Tommy decided maybe he was like being a squirrel after all."
The quiet, unforced realization that resolves Tommy's arc lands warmly for the intended reader.
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