To Make the World a Better Place
by Matthew C. Johnsen
BEST BOOK TO SPARK A DREAM BOOKY
The judge's reasoning
This is a devotional, meditative collection written by an older poet reflecting on mortality, faith, creativity, and civic conscience — and its greatest strength is the sincerity and moral seriousness with which it takes on its themes. This isn't marketed to children despite the illustrated-book framing note; it reads as an adult inspirational/spiritual poetry collection, closer to a personal hymnal than a picture book, so I've judged it as such.
The strongest material comes when Johnsen turns from abstraction toward the concrete and political. "Agnus Dei" is the collection's high point — the sacrificial-lamb imagery fused with the DEI acronym is a genuinely striking conceit, and lines like "Somewhere / Within this lamb / Of sacrifice / Lies the / beating heart / Of this nation, / On life support" earn their weight because the poem risks a real argument rather than settling for comfort. "Monday, January 26, 2026" and "A Better Way?" continue this vein — direct, angry, dated poems responding to specific news events, which give the book an unusual immediacy and moral urgency for a collection otherwise given to soft-focus gratitude and nature imagery.
The gentler poems ("Presents," "The Deep Pool," "A Slow Waltz") show real attentiveness to small sensory detail — the "high-pitched electrical hum," the "lingering taste on the tongue" of coffee — and the tercet exercise shows a poet consciously working craft. The book knows its reader: someone seeking comfort, reflection, and moral company in later life, and it delivers that honestly, without cynicism.
Judged by Brooke Hayes — Reader-at-Large · Cross-Genre · Emerging Voices
"Every book is the only book for somebody."
Supporting passages
"Somewhere Within this lamb Of sacrifice Lies the beating heart Of this nation, On life support."
The fusion of liturgical imagery with a contemporary political acronym gives the poem real conceptual bite.
"We feel the pain Of each victim. Each family member, Each friend. Of each innocent bystander Traumatized by Episodic— Nay, Endemic Violence."
The plain, direct language builds genuine collective grief rather than abstraction.
"Small desk lamp Lights white pages of Book and black scribbling, Lights sharp shadows Off pen as it slides Across page"
Careful sensory attention to a quiet domestic moment shows the poet's eye for small, specific detail.
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