Booky Awards Winner

The Write-In

by James Brandt


MOST TRADE-MAGAZINE-READY BOOKY
The Write-In cover

The judge's reasoning


The engine of this book is its premise, and Brandt knows it: a retired colonel, three days into his first anchor job, blurts out a write-in pitch for himself on live television — "why not cast your vote for me, Jake Kilthread? Frankly, in this political wasteland, I see no superior alternative" — and the country runs with it. That is a clean, one-sentence pitch (Mr. Smith Goes to Washington by way of a viral clip) and it never gets lost under the plotting. Every scene, from the VFW hall to the Fox News satellite feed to the polling-place encounter with Robert, the Korean War veteran who tells Jake "you've rekindled my hope in America," is built to deliver on that hook rather than complicate it.

That consistency is where the book earns its second mark, in Genre Execution. This is not literary fiction reaching for ambiguity; it's a wish-fulfillment political fable, and Brandt hits its required beats without skipping any — the disillusioned electorate, the corrupt duopoly embodied in Jameson and Woodbright, the folksy parody song ("if this election has got you seeing red, then just write in the name, Jake Kilthread"), the pastor's blessing, the family's unwavering support. Readers who pick this book up for its premise — an earnest, faith-and-family-inflected fantasy of an honest outsider breaking the two-party grip — get exactly what they came for, delivered without cynicism or hedging. The prose is often overworked and the dialogue frequently stilted, but the shape of the story does what it promises on the cover, and that promise is a genuinely marketable one.

Eleanor "Nell" Whitcombe

Judged by Eleanor "Nell" Whitcombe — Literary Fiction · Prose & Style

"A sentence either earns its breath or it doesn’t."

Supporting passages


Marketability & Hook
"let's inundate the ballot boxes with write-in votes. And why not cast your vote for me, Jake Kilthread? Frankly, in this political wasteland, I see no superior alternative."

The entire premise crystallizes into a single, pitchable line that could headline jacket copy.

Genre Execution
"I've been following your courageous stand on the news. For years, I've yearned for a leader with your integrity, someone unafraid to expose the hypocrisy of our elected officials... You've rekindled my hope in America."

A textbook wish-fulfillment beat, delivered exactly where the genre demands it, at the polling place on Election Day.

Per-axis rubric scores


Every Booky-winning book is scored across all ten craft axes. The award is given on the top axis (or top two for premium tiers).

Prose & Style
48
Characterization
58
Dialogue
45
Plot & Structure
60
World-Building
52
Originality
58
Emotional Resonance
60
Theme & Substance
62
Genre Execution
77
Marketability & Hook AWARDED
80

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