The Nazi Time Machine: Die Glocke
by Andy Jardine
BEST SERIES POTENTIAL BOOKY
The judge's reasoning
A sentence either earns its breath or it doesn't, and most of these do not — they gasp for one anyway, piling clause upon clause ("a symphony of silence, precision, and unwavering loyalty") until the reader stops trusting the prose to mean what it says. The preface alone runs nearly two thousand words explaining, in advance, everything the novel intends to be about — a fatal lack of confidence in the story's ability to speak for itself.
And yet the premise has genuine pulp appeal, and Jardine knows his subgenre. The Die Glocke conspiracy is a real strand of fringe WWII lore, and the book leans into it with evident enthusiasm — Xerum 525, torsion generators, the Harz Mountains facility, Kammler's documented historical role as the SS's engineering fixer. Readers who come to this genre for 'Nazi occult superweapon meets Cold War conspiracy' will recognize the ingredients and find them assembled with more research-flavored specificity than the prose style might suggest. The hook — a real historical figure vanishing into a genuine unsolved mystery, then re-emerging inside the CIA and the space program — is a strong, marketable engine for a conspiracy-thriller readership already primed by decades of Bell mythology in documentaries and pulp nonfiction.
The underground base sequences are the book's best material: concrete tunnel shafts, biometric locks, camouflaged shafts timed to lunar eclipses. It's overwritten, but it commits to a physical, textured sense of place that a genre reader can sink into. That commitment to atmosphere over character interiority is where this book's actual strength lives — not in Kammler's psychology, which stays gestural ("a specter of cold efficiency"), but in the sense of a hidden, humming, forbidden place.
Judged by Eleanor "Nell" Whitcombe — Literary Fiction · Prose & Style
"A sentence either earns its breath or it doesn’t."
Supporting passages
"corridors stretching hundreds of meters, cavernous chambers with ceilings that seemed to suspend the very atmosphere, all interconnected by a maze of service tunnels, ventilation shafts, and high-security checkpoints shrouded in electromagnetic interference technology"
Overwrought, but it builds a tangible, specific underground geography that genre readers can map.
"to activate Die Glocke, to attempt the dangerous and unproven, and if necessary, to flee through time itself into an uncertain future where the Reich might rise again"
A clean, high-concept pitch line that telegraphs the book's core commercial hook.
Per-axis rubric scores
Every Booky-winning book is scored across all ten craft axes. The award is given on the top axis (or top two for premium tiers).
Find out what your book does best.
Submit your book today. Get a real, honest, category-specific Booky — or every dollar back.
Submit Your Book → Screen Another Book