Booky Awards Winner

The Good Book

by Ron Stubberfield


BEST MARKETING HOOK BOOKY

The judge's reasoning


Stubberfield opens with a gut-punch — a four-year-old crushed under a tractor's plough discs, the sound of it ('Toonk!') seared into Rebecca's memory as a lifelong trauma trigger — and then, without pausing for breath, drops us into a death-row cell the night before her execution, confessing to a rookie priest that she's killed twenty-three people. That's a hook few thriller readers will put down. The reveal that Rebecca is gay, an atheist, and a former accountant recruited to pose as a radical Christian nationalist infiltrating a militia group ('The Guardians of the Constitution') run by a colonel's wife is a genuinely fresh premise — the closeted-outsider-playing-true-believer setup gives the book comic bite most political thrillers don't attempt. The bar scene where Rebecca and David rehearse her cover identity by hurling slurs at each other until the barman thinks they're 'rehearsing for a play' is a standout — funny, unsettling, and character-revealing all at once, and it does real narrative work: showing us exactly how far Rebecca is willing to go, and how well she can wear a lie.

The prose itself is uneven — some sentences need another editing pass ('Everything was as as it should have been') — but the structural instincts are sound: a framed confession narrative that promises payoff, a recurring sensory motif ('toonk') doing the job of unifying trauma and tone, and a villain-protagonist whose contempt for the people she's about to destroy is earned rather than asserted. This is a book built for readers who want their thrillers with teeth and a wicked sense of humor, and on that promise, it delivers.

Marcus Thorne

Judged by Marcus Thorne — Thriller · Mystery · Suspense · Commercial Fiction

"Plot is promises kept."

Supporting passages


Marketability & Hook
"I didn’t just kill him. There were many…many others...and a dismemberment."

A confession-in-a-cell reveal that immediately raises the stakes and demands the reader keep going.

Originality
"Yes, and by the way, while we’re at it, I don’t believe in God or a single word in that book of yours"

Subverts the expected 'Christian radical' assassin trope by making the protagonist a closeted atheist performing faith as a weapon.

Emotional Resonance
"Toonk! The sound a four-year-old baby sister’s head makes when impacted by the front end of a tractor."

A visceral, specific trauma image that recurs throughout the book as an effective emotional anchor.

Per-axis rubric scores


Every Booky-winning book is scored across all ten craft axes. The award is given on the top axis (or top two for premium tiers).

Prose & Style
71
Characterization
78
Dialogue
80
Plot & Structure
78
World-Building
74
Originality
83
Emotional Resonance
80
Theme & Substance
76
Genre Execution
78
Marketability & Hook AWARDED
85

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