Booky Awards Winner

Queer Justice

by Alex Charns


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Queer Justice cover

The judge's reasoning


Charns has spent forty-three years chasing FBI files, and it shows — not in dry exposition but in the texture of the world he builds. The Hoover-Tolson office scenes, with the bronze eagle "seeking prey" and Miss Gandy as "sphinxlike" gatekeeper, feel lived-in because they're built from documentary bone. The Supreme Court conference room — "Eighteen ears, sixteen of whom would honor their judicial oath" — is a genuinely good image, and the granular procedural detail (recusals, cert strategy, the actual Fortas dissent text on deportation and "deviate homosexuality") gives the book an authority most historical fiction about institutions never earns. Puck's Hamtramck Catholicism, rosary beads skipped past the crucifix, the Black Madonna "bleeding from three long gashes," and the D.C. Jail's "waterless aquarium like cage" all root the reader in a specific, corroded mid-60s Washington.

This is also, straightforwardly, a high-concept premise executed with commercial instinct: a real unresolved historical allegation (Fortas/FBI blackmail), a closeted power structure (Hoover, Tolson, DeLoach), and a scrappy underdog defense team. That's a hook — the title alone does work. The book knows its lane and leans into procedural detail (voir dire rules, peremptory strikes, hearsay objections) that will satisfy readers who want the mechanics of the era's injustice made concrete, not abstract.

Where it falls short: prose is frequently expository rather than dramatized ("He was 5'2' and Jackie Kennedyesque"), and dialogue often functions as information delivery rather than voice differentiation — Hoover and Tolson, DeLoach and Fortas, blur together in cadence even as the historical content differs. Emotional beats (Smith's assault, his conversion) are rushed past rather than earned. But the research-built world is the real spine here, and it holds.

Eleanor "Nell" Whitcombe

Judged by Eleanor "Nell" Whitcombe — Literary Fiction · Prose & Style

"A sentence either earns its breath or it doesn’t."

Supporting passages


World-Building
"Behind Hoover was a huge FBI shield and American flags on each side of him. On a bookshelf was a large bronze bald eagle with its wings spread, seeking prey."

A small, well-chosen detail that turns Hoover's office into a stage set for predation without stating the metaphor outright.

World-Building
"Eighteen ears, sixteen of whom would honor their judicial oath. Two ears might as well have been an FBI bug."

Efficient, chilling encapsulation of institutional betrayal that trusts the reader to do the arithmetic.

Marketability & Hook
"“I balled Abe Fortas,” said George Smith in an exaggerated stage whisper."

An opening line built entirely for hook and shock value, the kind that sells a premise in one sentence.

Per-axis rubric scores


Every Booky-winning book is scored across all ten craft axes. The award is given on the top axis (or top two for premium tiers).

Prose & Style
68
Characterization
72
Dialogue
70
Plot & Structure
75
World-Building AWARDED
79
Originality
82
Emotional Resonance
66
Theme & Substance
80
Genre Execution
78
Marketability & Hook
81

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