Booky Awards Winner

IN THE MATTER OF HUMANS- JUDGMENT

by Barry Wallace


BEST HARD SCI-FI BOOKY
IN THE MATTER OF HUMANS- JUDGMENT cover

The judge's reasoning


Wallace knows the first-contact playbook and runs it with genuine competence. This is comfort-food science fiction in the Sagan-adjacent, Childhood's End-descended tradition, and it delivers exactly what that reader wants: a wry, self-aware human narrator, an alien with charm and menace in equal measure, and the slow-build dread of a species being quietly judged. The choice to give Walter a fondness for Bogart impressions — "Here's looking at you, kid" followed by his own dry critique of twenty-first century cinema — is a smart character beat that does double duty, disarming the reader exactly as it disarms Michael, while letting the alien's true otherness (six fingers, thousand-year lifespans, translucent skin) sit underneath the banter like a blade in velvet.

The book's real strength is dialogue-driven tension management. The exchange between Michael and Agent Shaw at the door — the deadpan sparring, "You don't say," the pinky-promise blindfold negotiation — is genre-savvy, wisecracking first-person voice done with real timing. Wallace trusts his narrator's voice to carry scenes that could otherwise sag under exposition, and mostly it works: Michael's running commentary ("I was pretty sure my pen was unlikely to be mightier than whatever weapons any extraterrestrials might bring to bear") gives the reader a wry anchor point.

Where it earns its Genre Execution nod specifically is structural patience: the Glanville twist — the NSA claiming the whole encounter was a hoax — is a well-placed genre pivot that recalibrates trust exactly when a reader might start coasting. That's craft, not luck.

Eleanor "Nell" Whitcombe

Judged by Eleanor "Nell" Whitcombe — Literary Fiction · Prose & Style

"A sentence either earns its breath or it doesn’t."

Supporting passages


Genre Execution
""I am tempted to tease you a bit, and tell you I'm nine hundred years old or some such thing. I am ninety-nine, by your earth years.""

The playful misdirection followed by an oddly mundane number is exactly the kind of alien characterization that makes first-contact fiction sing.

Dialogue
""You do realize I'm the most important man in the world right now." I said it with a straight face, full Sam Spade."

Michael's noir-inflected banter under pressure gives the dialogue its distinct comic-tense register.

Per-axis rubric scores


Every Booky-winning book is scored across all ten craft axes. The award is given on the top axis (or top two for premium tiers).

Prose & Style
68
Characterization
74
Dialogue
76
Plot & Structure
70
World-Building
72
Originality
60
Emotional Resonance
65
Theme & Substance
71
Genre Execution AWARDED
79
Marketability & Hook
78

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