If I Were a Pony
by Leonard Eckhaus
MOST HEARTWARMING KIDS' BOOK BOOKY
The judge's reasoning
This is a grandfather's love letter dressed up as a pony poem, and it earns its emotion honestly. The concept — a pony who watches a boy grow from child to "grown man" — lets Eckhaus do something a lot of picture books shy away from: he tracks the whole arc of a relationship across time, from "You would bring me an apple / And I'd eat it with joy" through to the ache of "But if I were a pony / And too old to ride... I'd have tears in my eyes." That's a real theme for a picture book to hold — companionship, aging, and the bittersweetness of memory — and it doesn't flinch from the sad part, which is exactly what gives the joyful ending its weight.
The read-aloud rhythm is simple and steady, built for a parent or grandparent's voice: short quatrains, easy rhymes (boy/joy, ride/glide, near done/sun), the kind of repetition ("If I were a pony...") that young kids latch onto and start reciting along with. It's not innovative structurally — it's a familiar ballad form — but it's controlled, and the turn into the elegiac final third ("I'd remember how we frolicked / without any fears") shows real intentionality in the shaping, not just verse for verse's sake.
Given the dedication, this book knows exactly who it's for: a grandparent reading to a small child, and eventually that child rereading it as an adult and feeling the second half land differently. That's a lovely, specific kind of book to be.
Judged by Brooke Hayes — Reader-at-Large · Cross-Genre · Emerging Voices
"Every book is the only book for somebody."
Supporting passages
"But if I were a pony And too old to ride, When you came to visit I'd have tears in my eyes."
The poem's willingness to sit with aging and loss, rather than stay purely cheerful, is what gives it staying power.
"And if I were a pony And you were a grown man, You'd still come for a ride Like when we began."
Tracks the arc of a lifelong bond in a handful of lines, a substantial idea handled simply.
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