Booky Awards Winner

HOW JOJO GOT HER MOJO BACK

by Cynthia A King


MOST BELIEVABLE ANTIHERO BOOKY
HOW JOJO GOT HER MOJO BACK cover

The judge's reasoning


King's real gift is in the small, specific gestures that make a family feel lived-in rather than assembled. JoJo herself arrives fully formed in the first pages — a woman who bought herself a mug reading "Fucking Mother of the Year" as a joke that isn't quite a joke, who reads her husband's forced good mood "like an old copy of the Enquirer." That's a woman with a history, not a type.

The children are differentiated with real care. Abbey's habit of "cherry-pick[ing] the conversation" — wanting only the part of the story she wants — is a sharp, accurate piece of characterization that explains a decade of friction in one line. Frankie gets the book's best sustained scene: the nail through the sneaker, the trip to the farm supply store, Mr. Jim teaching him to pull a nail with a claw hammer. It's a flashback that could have been throwaway backstory, but King lets it breathe — "The tools! Thought Frankie. Mr. Jim helped Frankie find a hammer that felt good in his hand" — and it earns its emotional coda: JoJo treasuring it "in her mother's heart forever."

The dog Furry, too, is used with more restraint than the rest of the manuscript — she doesn't speak for the theme, she just watches the door, and that's enough.

On the genre-execution side, this is women's-fiction comfort food doing its job: a woman blindsided by abandonment who turns her humiliation into black comedy ("Lonely Lawnmower Looking for Loving Landscaper"), a rebuilding arc, a found-family kitchen table. The prose needs a firmer editorial hand — POV slips, repeated beats, run-on interior monologue — but the people underneath it are specific enough to root for.

Eleanor "Nell" Whitcombe

Judged by Eleanor "Nell" Whitcombe — Literary Fiction · Prose & Style

"A sentence either earns its breath or it doesn’t."

Supporting passages


Characterization
"Abbey tended to hold the people who didn’t know what Abbey wanted to know against them. Her sharp tongue would accuse the other party of keeping her in the dark or deliberately withholding information."

A precise, unsentimental diagnosis of a daughter's personality that explains the mother-daughter friction better than any argument scene could.

Genre Execution
"I’m going to find a divorce lawyer, and put an ad on Craigslist and sell his crap... Lonely Lawnmower Looking for Loving Landscaper. I like it."

The comic-revenge turn is exactly the register women's fiction readers come for — grief metabolized into a punchline.

Characterization
"He looked at his mom like she was crazy to think they would."

A small, dry beat that captures Ritchie's older-sibling detachment in a single gesture rather than exposition.

Per-axis rubric scores


Every Booky-winning book is scored across all ten craft axes. The award is given on the top axis (or top two for premium tiers).

Prose & Style
62
Characterization AWARDED
79
Dialogue
76
Plot & Structure
65
World-Building
68
Originality
60
Emotional Resonance
74
Theme & Substance
72
Genre Execution
78
Marketability & Hook
74

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