Genes: The Story of an Accidental Superhero
by Dianne Bramble
BEST TREATMENT OF LOSS BOOKY
The judge's reasoning
What makes this book work is the collision it dares to stage: the granular, unglamorous reality of a Parkinson's diagnosis — the frozen shoulder, the pinky tremor, the flowers that stop smelling like anything — set directly against the wish-fulfillment of a superhero origin story. The line "my brain cells are killing themselves" lands because it's specific and lived-in, not a device; you believe this narrator has actually sat in that neurologist's office. That specificity is the book's real asset, and it never disappears even once the powers arrive — the narrator keeps returning to mundane, disability-adjacent logistics (hiding vanished wrinkles, faking eye tests, explaining a torn-off office door) that a purely genre-first superhero novel wouldn't bother with.
The emotional core lands hardest in the family scenes rather than the action beats. The daughter's "Why don't you trust me with whatever this is?" is the strongest single moment in this excerpt — plain, undecorated, and true to how a teenager actually confronts a parent's secrecy, and the narrator's guilt ("I've never felt so horrible in my life") is earned rather than performed. The husband's inventory of feelings — fear, awe, jealousy, feeling inadequate — is handled with real generosity toward a character who could easily have been sidelined.
The prose itself is often plain and occasionally undercooked (stray typos, repeated rhetorical-question strings), and the sentence-level craft won't satisfy readers looking for a stylist. But the premise — an accidental, domestic, Parkinson's-adjacent superhero who worries about carpool and fingerprint records as much as villains — is genuinely her own, and the book earns its recognition on the strength of what it's actually about.
Judged by Eleanor "Nell" Whitcombe — Literary Fiction · Prose & Style
"A sentence either earns its breath or it doesn’t."
Supporting passages
"Parkinson’s is a neurodegenerative disease - it has no cure and gradually gets worse. Movement is normally controlled by dopamine, a chemical that carries signals between the nerves in the brain. When cells that normally produce dopamine die, the symptoms of Parkinson's appear."
The clinical precision here signals lived authority rather than research-by-Google, grounding the fantasy that follows.
""You don’t understand," I blurted out. "I’m not just improving, I’m… super!""
The collision of a doctor's-office scene with a superhero confession is the book's distinctive hybrid working exactly as intended.
""Mom, I know you’ve been lying to me about something. You always said we could talk about anything, share anything. Why don’t you trust me with whatever this is?""
An unadorned, earned confrontation that lands harder than any of the action sequences.
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