Booky Awards Winner

FILLED WITH HOPE: The Young Life of Margaret Castro

by Mary Krell-Oishi


TRUEST COMING-OF-AGE VOICE BOOKY
FILLED WITH HOPE: The Young Life of Margaret Castro cover

The judge's reasoning


What makes this opening work is Margaret herself — she's not a plaster saint-in-training, she's a real eight-year-old who lies about the change from the rice ("No. I looked right at her, keeping my face calm. It wasn't a lie"), throws a kickball at Juan's head for calling her Miss Priss, and also quietly gives away her favorite grape lollipop to a hungry cousin she's just met without telling anyone, including the reader upfront. That quiet generosity — 'It didn't need to be told' — is the book's best trick: it shows Margaret's calling through action before she or anyone else can name it, which pays off nicely against Carmen's gentle skepticism ('Every little Catholic girl thinks they want to be a nun... You will too'). The push-pull between a child's certainty and the adults who love her but can't see her yet is genuinely affecting, especially in the church scenes where she mistakes Father Anderson for Jesus and then keeps showing up to early Mass anyway, disappointed but 'stubborn.'

The period world-building carries real texture too — the tortilla holder, the lollipop jar 'glowing like a treasure chest,' the Formica table with its salt-pepper-sugar trio, the adobe bell tower that's now the entrance to the 5 Freeway. Old Town San Diego in 1947 feels lived-in rather than researched, and the Catholic ritual detail (Latin Mass, Eucharistic Adoration, the Act of Contrition) is handled with the specificity of someone who's actually sat in those pews. For readers drawn to faith-inflected biographical fiction about girls who don't fit the mold set for them, this earns its audience.

Brooke Hayes

Judged by Brooke Hayes — Reader-at-Large · Cross-Genre · Emerging Voices

"Every book is the only book for somebody."

Supporting passages


Characterization
""I already had one," I said. "I was going to give this one to Richard, but I think Elena would like it.""

A quick, unremarked-upon lie in service of generosity — this is exactly who Margaret is, shown rather than told.

World-Building
"It's funny to think that the place I called home then is now the entrance to the 5 Freeway. But back then it was a real family place."

A small, specific detail that grounds the historical setting and gives it real weight of loss and change.

Theme & Substance
"if I'm doing something that matters, I need to really do it. Not halfway. Not distracted. All in."

The book's vocation theme distilled into a child's plain, earned language rather than sermonizing.

Per-axis rubric scores


Every Booky-winning book is scored across all ten craft axes. The award is given on the top axis (or top two for premium tiers).

Prose & Style
72
Characterization AWARDED
82
Dialogue
76
Plot & Structure
70
World-Building
81
Originality
73
Emotional Resonance
78
Theme & Substance
80
Genre Execution
76
Marketability & Hook
75

Find out what your book does best.

Submit your book today. Get a real, honest, category-specific Booky — or every dollar back.

Submit Your Book → Screen Another Book