Booky Awards Winner

Executive Roadkill

by Michael A. Sisti


MOST ATMOSPHERIC SETTING BOOKY
Executive Roadkill cover

The judge's reasoning


Sisti's real strength here is the granular, lived-in texture of corporate bureaucracy — not a thriller's usual world (docks, precincts, war rooms) but cubicles, purchasing departments, and printing procurement, rendered with the specificity of someone who actually sat through those meetings. The dot-structure showdown with the printer Tim Spears, where Dave pulls out a loupe and says "I know my dots, and your dots are not good dots," is a small, satisfying set piece — a workplace power play staged like a heist. The Landrieu pharmacy-bag scheme and the prologue's backroom martini deal between Jack and Phil Lyons plant a slow-burn corruption plot that promises a corporate-thriller payoff, and the framing device (this is "based on actual events") gives the insider details — RIHIP's market collapse from 85% to 49%, the silo warfare between Marketing and Purchasing — real texture that readers who've worked in corporate America will recognize, as the blurbs from actual businesspeople attest.

Where the book currently under-delivers for the thriller/suspense category specifically is pacing and tension: these opening chapters read as workplace-satire episodes (email jokes, golf outings, water-cooler banter) rather than a mounting thriller engine. The prologue's ominous handshake deal is the genre hook, but chapters 1-20 mostly detour into Dave's professional triumphs before that thread resurfaces. Still, the corporate-conspiracy scaffolding — legislators, lobbyists, kickback schemes, an executive on the rise who doesn't yet see the trap closing — is a legitimate, well-observed setup, and the world it builds is distinctive enough to earn recognition.

Marcus Thorne

Judged by Marcus Thorne — Thriller · Mystery · Suspense · Commercial Fiction

"Plot is promises kept."

Supporting passages


World-Building
"Take a look at the dot structure and the ink coverage and tell me you still think the problem is the photography we supplied. I know my dots, and your dots are not good dots."

A hyper-specific procurement detail turned into a genuine power move, grounding the corporate world in real texture.

Theme & Substance
"People with hubris make up their own rules and spin convention to fit their personal needs."

The epigraph sets the book's thematic spine — ambition and downfall — that the prologue's backroom deal is built to dramatize.

Per-axis rubric scores


Every Booky-winning book is scored across all ten craft axes. The award category comes from the top axis; a second axis at or above 75 appears as secondary recognition.

Prose & Style
65
Characterization
68
Dialogue
70
Plot & Structure
62
World-Building AWARDED
79
Originality
70
Emotional Resonance
58
Theme & Substance SECONDARY RECOGNITION
76
Genre Execution
60
Marketability & Hook
68

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