DON’T BE LIKE THAT
by Cynthia King
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The judge's reasoning
King knows how to open a book. The FBI battering down the door on the first page, the antique desk broken 'into firewood,' the phone yanked away as 'evidence' — this is a hook built for readers who want the wronged-Wall-Street-wife premise (think The Undoing by way of Big Little Lies) and it delivers immediately, with no throat-clearing.
What elevates it past a straight thriller pitch is Leslie herself. She's drawn with a consistent, specific temperament: furious, funny, and instinctively generous under pressure. The jail-cell detour with Diamond/Christine could have been filler, but it's actually the book's best scene — Leslie, in prison sweats and rage, still negotiates a stranger's exit from a trafficking situation ('Because I stabbed my husband. I'm not real high on men right now') and it reads as character, not plot mechanics. Her line to the FBI agent — 'FBI, IRS, I'd like to buy a vowel' — is the kind of deflective gallows humor that makes a protagonist feel lived-in rather than assembled.
The prose itself is uneven — exposition-heavy dialogue, some clichéd interiority ('the ache in her chest felt like an anvil') — but the hook and the voice are strong enough to carry a reader past that, which is exactly what this genre asks for. This is a book that knows its premise and its protagonist, and leans into both.
Judged by Eleanor "Nell" Whitcombe — Literary Fiction · Prose & Style
"A sentence either earns its breath or it doesn’t."
Supporting passages
"Bam! Bam! Bam! Loud pounding on the door woke Leslie with a start."
An immediate, visceral opening that establishes stakes and momentum before the reader has any context — pure hook.
"Because I stabbed my husband. I’m not real high on men right now. I’d stab Raymond just for the fuck of it."
Leslie's dark humor and impulsive generosity toward a stranger in crisis define her more sharply than any physical description could.
"That’s a myth. It’s green privilege. If you have enough money, you can do whatever you want."
A blunt, specific thematic line that sets up the book's interest in class and complicity rather than just betrayal.
Per-axis rubric scores
Every Booky-winning book is scored across all ten craft axes. The award category comes from the top axis; a second axis at or above 75 appears as secondary recognition.
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