Dare to Dream With Eyes Wide Open
by Marcia Regina Cook
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The judge's reasoning
This is an inspirational faith-and-self-help book, and judged on its own terms — direct address, scripture-anchored affirmation, personal testimony braided with motivational aphorism — it delivers what its intended reader is looking for. The genre asks for a warm, unrelenting voice that tells the reader they are capable and loved, and Cook supplies that voice consistently across three chapters without losing conviction. The strongest material in this excerpt is autobiographical rather than aphoristic: the account of her cardiac arrest during surgery, the asystole, the near-death experience, and the promise she makes to God before sedation reads with real specificity and stakes ("I was cold as ice, I had vomited all over myself...my heart went into an asystole"). That passage earns its emotional register because it is concrete and singular to her, unlike the surrounding generalized pep-talk paragraphs.
The book's throughline — that fear is the one root obstacle, that self-knowledge unlocks capability, that scripture and mind-power operate on the same energy — is not new territory, but it is deployed with genuine sincerity and consistent structure (chapter openers with quotations, chapter summaries, rhetorical-question cascades to draw the reader into self-examination). The rhetorical-question technique ("What is holding you down today?") is overused but functional for the genre's coaching register.
What holds this back from higher marks: the prose is heavily reliant on cliché ("the sky is the limit," "burn the bridges"), the theology and physics-adjacent claims (energy, telepathy, Tesla quote) are asserted rather than earned, and there's little modulation of intensity — every paragraph is pitched at the same fervent volume. But within its genre, this is a workmanlike, sincere, readable inspirational text with at least one passage of real testimonial power.
Judged by Eleanor "Nell" Whitcombe — Literary Fiction · Prose & Style
"A sentence either earns its breath or it doesn’t."
Supporting passages
"I was cold as ice, I had vomited all over myself, I lost control of my bladder, I had lost control of my bowels, and my heart went into an asystole (complete stop) for a prolonged time."
The one moment where testimony outruns aphorism, grounding the book's promises in a specific, harrowing personal event.
"By changing our minds, we will change our feelings, by changing our feelings we will change our actions, and by changing our actions, we will change our condition and the course of our lives."
A clean, quotable statement of the book's central self-help thesis, delivered with the cadence the genre rewards.
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