Booky Awards Winner

Byron: The One Lung Filipinomenon

by Russovoir


MOST ATMOSPHERIC SETTING BOOKY
Byron: The One Lung Filipinomenon cover

The judge's reasoning


Byron's narration builds a Manila I haven't quite seen rendered this way before — moneyed, mestizo, brand-obsessed, and quietly suffocating under religious patriarchy, all filtered through a wickedly self-aware eighteen-year-old who annotates his own life like a Wikipedia rabbit hole. The digressions on skin-whitening soap, the peso-to-dollar Studio 54 math, the taxonomy of "green flags" for spotting a closeted gay man — these aren't padding, they're the book's real texture, and they do more world-building than any straightforward scene-setting could. The line about "looking for your favorite crayon in a black and white photo" to describe gaydar-hunting in a country with no visible gay culture is genuinely sharp, and the running bit about Filipino men having "only two settings of emotions: Steady and Off" lands as both funny and quietly damning.

The book's ambition outpaces its emotional delivery in this opening stretch — Miguel appears and vanishes into hookup-then-viral-photo territory before we get real interiority about what Byron feels for him beyond horniness and status-envy, and the prose sometimes trips over its own cleverness (there are more clauses than the sentences can carry). But the voice is distinct, the satire of class and religion in the Philippines has real bite, and the opening HIV-testing frame bookending the birthday flashback is a structurally smart choice that promises more emotional weight is coming. This is a book that knows exactly what world it's building and isn't afraid to be catty about it.

Vivienne Park

Judged by Vivienne Park — Romance · Women’s Fiction · Emotional Craft

"If I don’t ache for them, the book hasn’t done its job."

Supporting passages


World-Building
"In my eighteen years of middleclass privilege, I could not for the gay hormones in me find a gay bar. Mind you, this was well into the 00's. New York has had Studio 54 since the 70's! Where were we on the map of progress?"

Captures the specific, lived texture of being gay in a particular Philippine social class and era, not a generic queer coming-of-age setting.

Originality
"History hasn't been so kind to the gays; in the face of being fatally lynched or driven to suicide, a more favorable option is to hide who you are. Over time, homosexuality has become a costume that you can take off, as opposed to your entire humanity."

A genuinely striking, unusual formulation of closeting that elevates the book's essayistic digressions beyond mere quirk.

Characterization
"And then there's me. Byron David Thomas. No talent."

A quick, self-deprecating beat that reveals Byron's insecurity beneath the bravado, grounding the comic voice in something more vulnerable.

Per-axis rubric scores


Every Booky-winning book is scored across all ten craft axes. The award is given on the top axis (or top two for premium tiers).

Prose & Style
74
Characterization
76
Dialogue
70
Plot & Structure
62
World-Building AWARDED
79
Originality
82
Emotional Resonance
63
Theme & Substance
76
Genre Execution
68
Marketability & Hook
74

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